Can someone correct my application, please?

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Thank you in advance! I know, it is very long, but I'm a foreigner, I really need your help! DID

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm very pleased to have the opportunity to apply for a position as xx at xx (company). Having understood the job description, I believe that I have the necessary qualifications and skills to apply for this job.

At xx University in USA, I received a bachelor's degree in industrial design. Now I have just finished my Master in Media Arts at the xx University in Germany. During my master's studies, I worked at xx (I delivered the official website design for five Western European countries). During the internship, I worked as a UI / UX designer for six months. I have the opportunity to support the department and perform various online campaigns:

Landing page for product promotion

2) Landing page for new product launch

I have implemented all visual design phases from conception to final delivery to engineering.

At the time, XX was the fourth largest brand in the European smartphone market. And our official website has been commented by millions. The income has increased significantly. I have gained valuable experience working at Huawei. I understand the importance of a working application or website that is not just a pretty face on the internet. The purpose of User Experience (UX) is to increase customer satisfaction and sales by providing users with maximum ease of use, use and fun. Products can exist only to meet the needs of users through their functions.

The appendix is my curriculum vitae listing my previous experiences.

If you think that my qualifications are right for your job, I hope. I have the opportunity to have a personal conversation. Thank you for your consideration, I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

pr

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Apply for the job as a web designer

Dear Ms. Meier (CEO),

Dear Mr. Müller (PV),

As an industrial designer with a bachelor's degree from Harvard University and a master in media art from FU Berlin, as well as internships as a UI and UX designer, I'm in a position to independently carry out your online campaigns right from the start. I'm applying for this job. (…)