Your new or new?

Hi: Yesterday I had a writing test (training call center, in the back office) During the test (30 min time) I was so nervous and had racing heart. I made a lot of mistakes exrem. The test was mainly about the expression in written customer contact. We will be notified next week if we have all passed. I do not know how strict they are.

Here is an example of a case:

A friend asks you for a private favor. His boss wants to buy a new NATEL® and needs help. Talking to your friend, you realize that your current mobile phone is exactly what you need.

Now try to convince Ms. Müller in an e-mail from your device and suggest to her where she can buy it from Swisscom. Answer in 6-10 sentences.

Dear Mrs Müller

I'm happy to assist you in the selection of your new (N) device. Your colleague told me that in addition to a large display especially the camera is important. I myself am a big fan of the new Huawei P30 Pro and use it privately as well. With this device you get exactly those functions and features you have imagined. You do not need an additional camera anymore. I can only recommend this device. As a little tip. We have just discounted on selected devices. The Huawei P30 Pro is also there

For further information do not hesitate to contact me. Feel free to reply to this e-mail.

Have a nice day.

With characteristics comes nevertheless a comma? The bad thing is that I actually know how to write it correctly.

The other case was where I forgot a hyphen:

Thank you for your request concerning your name (-) and move message.

I apologize for the inconvenience. I have adjusted your (new) last name (s) in our system. Of course, you will receive a corrected invoice by mail, (comma off) in the next few days. I'm happy to confirm that we have received your removal notice.

I hope that I could solve your request to your satisfaction. If you have further questions, we're always at your disposal.

Your newN

The dative is the genitive his death

look here:

https://www.grundschulkoenig.de/die-4-faelle/

After the headline, it's just about "their new".
This is a rechargeable battery, therefore:

Adapted your new surname

Selection of your new (N) device. => Selection of your new device.

Fan of the new (N) Huawei P30 Pro => Fan of the new Huawei…

As a little tip. We have => As a little tip: we have

So by the way: Why do you ask the question so often and again?

If you have no other problems than the actual missing comma, is still hope.

There may be perfectionists who always want to do everything right.

But do you need them always and everywhere?

It's even lovelier to meet people who do not always do everything - right and perfect.

And "she" will surely see it the same way.

And in case you run out of commas, in the appendix I have attached some for you.

, - hope they reach…

Absolutely right with the genitive!

I'm only a little afraid that the dative version will soon be in Duden because sooo many are using it 😥

Commas or commas, but not commas 😊

* accusative

You see, you're right. And do we all need "perfectionists" everywhere - who find that some people on the tablet sometimes type one letter too much?

If you feel like you're being attacked, then you're really sorry.

Nope- I do not feel attacked. And I'm not a perfectionist - and I do not want to be. Perfectionists communicate via 01010100010110 … Digital. I'm a human being and I also make mistakes that I admit to others in the same way.

All good.

It may be that you did not know that it is not Kommatas. I meant that just fine